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On the cover of Rolling Stone …

I had a day off work. I promised myself I would write and I was so looking forward to it. Today when I should have been writing:-

I made 3 trips to the train station to drop off and pick up teen age children.

Baked choc chip cookies with son number 4.

Discovered the cat had been shut in the bathroom and peed on the bathmat. (Why does cat pee smell so bad?)

Stripped the bathroom (threw out the mat) mopped the floor and …

Put through 3 loads of washing, brought in another 3 loads of washing (still not sorted and put away).

Went shopping with daughter number one and we set the world to rights over coffee.

Then daughter number two turned up and we had to set the world to rights, too.

The I opened my mail and discovered this …

My wonderful publishers, SOLARIS, have done a promo for the King Rolen’s Kin trilogy on the back of the 2000AD comic.  You know that line from the Dr Hook ‘Wanna get my Picture on the cover of Rolling Stone!’

Well this is not quite that but it is awfully close. Feeling really inspired despite the cat!

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Are all dedicated readers aspiring writers?

I love reading.

But I can just remember a time when I couldn’t read. I was two and my mother had a picture in the bathroom. It contained a children’s nursery rhyme about cleaning up the bathroom. And after the bath, she’d point to it and read it and say, now you can’t leave the bathroom before you clean it up. So we’d put the toys away and hang up the bathmat.

I hated that picture because it had power over me and no matter how hard I tried I couldn’t see where the power came from.

I started school at four and I don’t remember learning to read.  It was the time of Dick and Dora and their dog Spot. (See Spot run. See Dick run. See Dora run. Riveting stuff). I remember being pages ahead of  the class because listening to them read was painful. When it came to my turn I had no idea where they were and the teacher thought I couldn’t read.

So reading is like breathing to me. I can’t help it. Conversely coming up with stories is also like breathing. There have always been stories in my head. I’d pester my poor grandfather for stories. And wonder why he couldn’t come up with dozens of them. His stories tended to be practical snippets like. You grab a snake behind the head real quick, and crack him like a whip to break his back. Grandfather was from the bush.

When I had my secondhand bookshop I’d read a book before lunch, a book after lunch and a book after dinner. (This was in the days when books were 60,000 words). Soon I’d read every book that interested me in my shop. I’d prowl the shelves searching for anything that piqued my interest. When ever someone bought in books to sell I’d put aside any that I found interesting and devour them.

But before long there were days when I could not find anything to read. Or I would start books and get annoyed with them. So I just had to write to feed my reading habit. That’s how I started writing.

Are all dedicated readers aspiring writers? Over at the ROR blog the Sunday Writing Craft post is a Checklist for Aspiring Writers.

I suppose it is different now that we can buy the DVD of our choice, surf the net and play computer games.  But sometimes, only a book will do. What do you do when you can’t find a book to read?

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Lovers of Dark Urban Fantasy …

For those of you who like Dark Urban Fantasy, here is a review of Trent Jamieson’s book. Death Most Definite. They say:

‘The fascinating central premise of Death as a corporate interest is handled in a serious and frighteningly credible manner, allowing for some engrossing and inventive world-building on the author’s part; the twist-laden plot belts along at breathtaking pace from page one (‘unputdownable’ is a fair description)’

Naturally, I’m delighted with this. I got to read Trent’s book in the final draft at ROR in March 2009 when we stayed in Maleny. Lots of delicious cooking, thanks to Dirk Flinthart, lots of wine and lots of talk about the craft of writing, while analysing my friends’ wonderful books. What could be better?

And here is the bookplate I designed for Trent. Look out for book one of his Death Works trilogy in the bookstores in August.

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Matrix Overloaded!

Today I watched the first Matrix movie and analysed it with my students, twice. We looked at the way the movie follows the Hero’s Journey and the classic three act structure.

The Matrix hits so many of the steps of the Hero’s Journey it’s a good one to use. The call to adventure is actually a phone call, the Resurrection is actually a resurrection.

The first Matrix movie was made in 1999, 11 years ago and the students who were with me would have been kids at the time. They laughed at scenes that, when the movie came out, made us go ‘Wow, that is so cool’.

This made me realise how lines and images from the movie have become genre tropes, which I guess is a sign of a ground breaking genre movie.

For instance, that image of Carrie-anne Moss leaping into the air, had become a cliche by the time the princess did it in the first Shrek movie.

And there’s the spoon boy. In my house we sometimes say ‘There is no spoon’ to close a philosophical discussion. Everyone gets the reference.

Wonder what they boy is doing now.

And then there’s bullet time. Even the phrase carries the connotations. It’s a short-hand way of describing action.

For those of you who are into these things here’s a site with memorable quotes from the movie.

I enjoyed revisiting the first Matrix movie and taking the time to analyse what the Wachowski brothers were doing.

It is not the sort of thing I’d choose to watch over and over, unlike Fire Fly for instance, which has layers upon layers. But I can still admire it for what it is.

I guess a writer or movie maker knows they have made an impression when things they’ve created become part of popular culture. When a new type of hominid gets named a ‘hobbit’  you know that the book where that invented word appeared has become mainstream.

What movies of books have made a lasting impression on you? What did you find yourself thinking about days afterwards?

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Help for writers …

Writing is a lonely business, just you and the characters in your head.

But you don’t have to be alone, looking out at the big world of publishing, wishing you were swimming in those waves. (OK, I’ll stop the analogy now).

There are writing groups out there specifically for Speculative Fiction writers (spec fic – fantasy, science fiction and horror). I’ve done a post over at the ROR blog which attempts to be a round-up of Australian Spec Fic writing groups.

I learnt so much from the Vision writing group and made friends many of whom have gone on to be published writers. It is great to be able to share the ups and downs of completing a book, sending it off, getting rejections and ploughing on.

Only another writer will really understand the thrill of that phone call, when an editor rings you up to make an offer on your book. (They ring you up because they like to hear you go ‘Squeeee’ when you realise what they are saying).

So consider joining a writing group. If meeting in person feels a bit daunting, there are the online groups. Vision has an e-group where you can dip your toes in the water, as it were. (Okay, now I really will stop with the analogy).

Do you belong to a writing group? Maybe you belong to a reading group.

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Firefly, why weren’t there more episodes?

I’m currently preparing a lecture on dialogue and I began to trawl the Firefly series for examples.

It made me realise I could use this series for examples of excellent world building.

And characterisation.

Dramatic tension.

Subtle subtext in dialogue and character interaction.

Lighting and shooting. Music (that scene where they bring the young man’s dead body home).

Planting of clues that contribute towards a larger story arc in self contained episodes.

In fact the whole series is just so darn good, I don’t know why it was cancelled. What’s your favourite scene from Firefly?

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A Salute to Female Writers of the 70s

Recently I came across an interesting phenomenon. Young women of today (educated, professional young women) find feminism a bit passe. ‘What’s all the fuss about?’.

I was there in the 70s  when the books written by female SF writers were being published.

In the 70s I had a bookshop where I sat and read all day. I’d read a book before lunch, a book after lunch and a book after dinner. It was heaven. Amongst the authors I discovered were  Joanna Russ, Vonda McIntyre, Ursula K Le Guin and Doris Lessing.

This was back in the days before the web and you could hardly discover anything about writers. I never knew that Russ had won both the Hugo and the Nebula, I just liked her books. When I discovered Joanna Russ, I read everything of hers that I could find. I can still remember scenes from her books 30 years later. Her characters were so different, they resonated with me. Now I can google her bio to learn about her. Her wry sens of humour came through her writing. Here’s a great quote from her on ‘How to Suppress Women’s Writing.

“She didn’t write it. She wrote it but she shouldn’t have. She wrote it but look what she wrote about. She wrote it but she isn’t really an artist, and it isn’t really art. She wrote it but she had help. She wrote it but she’s an anomaly. She wrote it BUT…”

And here’s a review of ‘How to Suppress Women’s Writing’.

Then there’s Ursula K Le Guin, much has been written about her work.  In 1969 when Le Guin wrote Left Hand of Darkness it won the Hugo and the Nebula. See here for some background info. (And here is a study guide for the book. Don’t you love the web?). When I read ‘Left Hand of Darkness’ I had no trouble identifying with the  non-gendered aliens. But the first time I read it I didn’t notice  that Le Guin had used  the male pronoun for these aliens. This book is all about gender and perception, yet  she used ‘he’ as the generic pronoun. When asked years later, Le Guin said she had used ‘he’ as a default. (I came across this quote while researching for my MA, and don’t know where the reference is now). But since then …

‘Le Guin has written essays since about the assumptions she made in writing the book. She’s also written the story “The Winter King” where she uses “she” as the pronoun for all Gethenians, rather than “he” as she does in the book (The Left Hand of Darkness), and the story “Coming of Age in Karhide.” Both of these explicitly feminise the Gethenians. They’re interesting, as are her writings about the book, but they’re afterthoughts from a different world.’

It is amazing how the perception of the character changes if you believe the narrator to be male or female. I once read a whole short story where no gender specific pronouns were used. (No ‘he’ or ‘she’). It made for some challenging grammar.The author used non-gender specific names and I found my perception of whether the character was male or female changed depending on whether they were being active or passive. The author was making a point about our perceptions as readers. (This story was also published in the 70s, when feminism was pushing boundaries).

Vonda McIntyre came out to Australia for a convention in the late 70s. (Can’t remember which one). I read her book ‘Dreamsnake’ . It won both a Hugo and Nebula. One line made me realise how gender blinkered I was by my upbringing. We are all products of our time. We don’t see it how blinkered we are unless writers and artists hold a mirror to us. SF and Fantasy create their own worlds, so they can hold a slightly distorted mirror that can surprise us with its insights.

In 2007 Lessing was awarded the Noble Prize for Literature. With Doris Lessing I must have discovered her in the brief period that she was writing Fantasy and SF. It is all a bit fuzzy now, but what stands out in my mind is the humanity of her writing.

All these years later, I’m taking my hat off to those writers. Thank you, Ladies.

It is because of people like you that feminism can seem passe.

What writers have impressed you with their insights?

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Writers and time management

One of my writing friends asked for a writing craft blog post about how not to waste time surfing the net and reading blogs when you should be writing. While being aware of the irony of this, I got into the spirit and confessed to having a LOL Cat addiction.

I actually think LOL cats is evidence that the world is not a terrible place. The news gives us this skewed view of the world full of disasters and politics and sport. But there are all these people out there taking pictures of their pets and coming up with funny captions, which proves that the world is not all death and disaster.

Here’s one that I just love. I think you have to be a cat person to really appreciate it.

Having been way too over committed recently, I thought  others could learn from my mistakes. So I gave the ‘writer and time management thing’ some thought, and did a post over at the ROR blog on the topic.

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This one’s for Fletcher

If you are a young writer who is looking for feedback on your work, showing your parents and friends is all very well but, unless they are writers,  they won’t be able to give you the feedback you need to help you develop as a writer.

If you are serious about your writing craft, then join a local writing group. Look for one that specialises in your genre. If you’re writing speculative fiction (fantasy, SF and horror) then Visions Writers is great. They have an on-line group for everyone and meet in person in Brisbane city, so that’s handy if you live in South East Queensland. Grace Dugan joined the Vision group when she was 15 and went on to be published by Penguin.

The Queensland Writers Centre run a Young Adult Master Class series, specifically aimed at high school students who want to develop their writing skills.

It is also great to have goals and submitting to a competition is a good way to get motivated to finish the story. Who knows you might win or get noticed by the judges who are often editors. So there is the Somerset College novella competition. On the Ipswich Literary Festival site there is a list of writing competitions for people under 18. There is also the Voices on the Coast Literary Festival, which has competitions, although theirs is closed for this year.

And there are markets in Australia for spec Fic short stories. ASIM is a regular magazine which has a good turn around time for submissions. Here’s the guidelines. And here is the Specusphere web zine. And here is Inspillers which lists current markets, competitions, magazines

Here’s an Australian Spec Fic site with lots of news  and reviews. If you want to know what’s doing well in Australia by Australian authors in this genre, take a look at the Aurealis Awards page.

And if you are interested in the craft of writing the ROR site run a writing craft post every Sunday, just put in requests. The latest one was on agents.

Lastly, if you are keen to write, talk to your school or local library about bringing a published author in to run workshops. The Redlands libraries have had me run three workshops in the last month, How to write a Book Proposal, Writing Dark Urban Fantasy and Pitching your Book.

Writers are a friendly supportive bunch. We are all united by a passion for writing and our love of the genre.  Feel free to ask questions.

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Do creative people have more vivid dreams?

When I went to an acupuncturist, he asked me about my dreams. I told him I have lots of vivid fascinating dreams, complete with backstory, in full colour. I didn’t tell him they were sometimes stylized (if I’d been reading graphic novels) or, on rare occasions, set to music with rhyming dialogue. ( I know, weird).

He said it wasn’t normal for people to dream vividly every night. I’d thought my dreams were normal.

And perhaps they were for me.

According to David Watson, a professor of psychology in the UI College of Liberal Arts and Sciences,  “There is a fundamental continuity between how people experience the world during the day and at night,” he said. “People who are prone to daydreaming and fantasy have less of a barrier between states of sleep and wakefulness and seem to more easily pass between them.” In other words, creative people tend to have vivid dreams. See the full article here.

Now, it seems,  video game players might be able to control their dreams up to a point. Jayne Gackenbach, at Grant McEwan University has been doing research into dreams and gamers. She found that lucid dreamers and gamers tended to have better spacial skills. Both groups had a high level of concentration.  According to a 2006 study, people who frequently played video games were more likely to have lucid dreams and to be aware that they were dreaming.

“A second study tried to narrow down the uncertainties by examining dreams that participants experienced from the night before, and focused more on gamers. It found that lucid dreams were common, but that the gamers never had dream control over anything beyond their dream selves.

The gamers also frequently flipped between a first person view from within the body and a third person view of themselves from outside, except never with the calm detachment of a distant witness.” See the full article here.

I’ve been reading a book on current knowledge about plasticity of the human brain. It looks like game players have been rewiring their brains specfically for this ability. The more you do something the more this sinks into your brain and becomes second nature.  So keep reading, keep day dreaming and keep dreaming. It is all tied into creativity, even if we don’t understand how or why, just yet.

I’ve used scenes from dreams as leaping off points for stories. Do you experience vivid dreams? Ever had a dream where everyone is talking in rhyme?

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