Simon says: (Sorry, couldn’t help myself!)
I did like Belinda’s idea of the hero texting his allies on the eve of battle, and thought Cecilia’s ‘pick a new move already’ line (like Tyler’s feisty girl using that cliff) was more than justified (BTW think I know that nameless author, or maybe just somebody using the same seduce-by-numbers template).
But I had to hand it to Thoraiya for utter truth in storytelling: Vader: No, I am your father. Luke: Can I have twenty bucks? Yep, that’s so achingly accurate, that I simply have to lob the final cliche’ over it: Thoraiya, the force is with YOU.
Thoraiya email me (Rowena). You already have my email. Don’t worry if I don’t get right back to you. I’ll be without internet for a couple of days.
Yay! *dances around* Thank you!